« Go Mason! | Main | The economics of Joseph Biden »

Walter Benjamin's tips for writing

An occasional MR reader sent me these:

I. Anyone intending to embark on a major work should be lenient with himself and, having completed a stint, deny himself nothing that will not prejudice the next.        

II. Talk about what you have written, by all means, but do not read from it while the work is in progress. Every gratification procured in this way will slacken your tempo. If this regime is followed, the growing desire to communicate will become in the end a motor for completion. 

III. In your working conditions avoid everyday mediocrity. Semi-relaxation, to a background of insipid sounds, is degrading. On the other hand, accompaniment by an etude or a cacophony of voices can become as significant for work as the perceptible silence of the night. If the latter sharpens the inner ear, the former acts as a touchstone for a diction ample enough to bury even the most wayward sounds. 

IV. Avoid haphazard writing materials. A pedantic adherence to certain papers, pens, inks is beneficial. No luxury, but an abundance of these utensils is indispensable.    

V. Let no thought pass incognito, and keep your notebook as strictly as the authorities keep their register of aliens.   

VI. Keep your pen aloof from inspiration, which it will then attract with magnetic power. The more circumspectly you delay writing down an idea, the more maturely developed it will be on surrendering itself. Speech conquers thought, but writing commands it.   

VII. Never stop writing because you have run out of ideas. Literary honour requires that one break off only at an appointed moment (a mealtime, a meeting) or at the end of the work.   

VIII. Fill the lacunae of inspiration by tidily copying out what is already written. Intuition will awaken in the process.   

IX. Nulla dies sine linea -- but there may well be weeks.   

X. Consider no work perfect over which you have not once sat from evening to broad daylight.   

XI. Do not write the conclusion of a work in your familiar study. You would not find the necessary courage there.   

XII. Stages of composition: idea -- style -- writing. The value of the fair copy is that in producing it you confine attention to calligraphy. The idea kills inspiration, style fetters the idea, writing pays off style.   

XIII. The work is the death mask of its conception.

Posted by Tyler Cowen on August 23, 2008 at 05:25 AM in Books | Permalink

Comments

No word on double negatives?

Posted by: chrisare at Aug 23, 2008 5:51:59 AM

Nulla dies?!?

Posted by: Andromeda at Aug 23, 2008 8:39:53 AM

Double negatives are OK only if they are not unintended.

Posted by: Bandwagon Smasher at Aug 23, 2008 10:54:25 AM

On the other hand, did Walter Benjamin ever finish anything?

Posted by: Aaron Haspel at Aug 23, 2008 11:41:48 AM

I was motivated by point VII to write this comment.

Posted by: at Aug 23, 2008 11:53:34 AM

For a writing expert, his allusions are not clear.

Posted by: eric at Aug 23, 2008 12:10:17 PM

This has to be Tyler being ironic. These tips, and the way they're written, are aweful.

Posted by: Richard S. at Aug 23, 2008 1:22:01 PM

I would never take writing tips from someone who writes like that.

Posted by: Doug at Aug 23, 2008 1:23:32 PM

A few sentences are bad but overall I think these tips are fascinating.

Whether they're efficacious I can't say since I've never written a book.

Posted by: mk at Aug 23, 2008 2:32:13 PM

Cite? Are these real?

Posted by: Guest at Aug 23, 2008 4:58:37 PM

what terrible writing, particularly point IV.

did the author really need to use that many words rather than, say "choose your writing materials carefully"? i can't understand how IV would have any application to using a laptop anyway, which i'm positive nearly all writers use nowadays.

seriously, who wrote this? shame.

Posted by: anon at Aug 23, 2008 6:22:33 PM

The advice is great but his style is horrid. I swear I had to dust off my decoder ring for a few of these.

Posted by: Daniel Reeves at Aug 24, 2008 2:22:54 AM

Is Walter Benjamin truly an ideal role model for writers? Maybe he's a better role model than Wittgenstein, but that's about it. Benjamin's favorite Bible story is the one in which Jacob wrestles with the angel, precisely because nobody has any idea what it means. Benjamin strove to sound ineffably profound, as if he too were wrestling with a higher order of meaning, and mostly ended up being obscure.

Posted by: Steve Sailer at Aug 24, 2008 3:03:20 AM

"Let no thought pass incognito, and keep your notebook as strictly as the authorities keep their register of aliens."

That is easily the worst sentence I have read today. The form is as strained and unpleasant as everything else in the list, and I have no idea what the simile is supposed to mean. What certain statements can we make about the "register of aliens?" What experience leads us to suspect that it is strict, let alone the very model of strictness?

Posted by: DJH at Aug 26, 2008 1:07:05 PM

Terrible writing. But #s 10 & 11 have merit.

Posted by: figspeachesplumscherries at Aug 26, 2008 5:39:44 PM

Laughably bad writing. But kottke linked it, so not everyone's in on the joke.

Posted by: mark2 at Sep 2, 2008 12:42:12 PM

I must assume that many of the above comments were made in ignorance of the person and work of Walter Benjamin.

Posted by: Charles at Sep 3, 2008 1:18:13 AM

I liked it. I actually got a good laugh at some of the previous commenters after I looked up Walter Benjamin. He's certainly well qualified!

Posted by: Dustin Boston at Sep 4, 2008 1:23:19 AM

The Roman numerals were a turnoff from the beginning, but intrigued me enough to read on. I looked up the word “insipid” for number III, but then read the rest of number III and decided to forget what I looked up so as not to confuse myself further. Sorry, it’s hard not to imitate great writing!  Commenter DJH picked the perfect word to describe this writing: “strained.”

Posted by: Booklet Printing | PrintPlace at Sep 4, 2008 5:13:05 PM

You'll need to take up style concerns with Benjamin's translators, folks.

Posted by: CLH at Sep 6, 2008 3:59:48 PM

I thought these pieces of advice were very thought-provoking. "Let no thought pass incognito" in particular strikes me as excellent advice, and I was surprised to see someone make fun of it. If you don't like the style--well--read it in the original German and report back to us then.

Posted by: Charlie C. at Sep 7, 2008 2:47:44 PM

I'm not sure if the word "aweful" is supposed to be punny or not.

Posted by: Jeremy at Sep 29, 2008 3:52:39 PM

The salient problem tripping up the majority of the preceding respondents is a plangent unfamiliarity with sustained cogitation.

Posted by: Kevin at Nov 20, 2008 4:19:31 PM

The salient problem tripping up the majority of the preceding respondents is a plangent unfamiliarity with sustained cogitation.

Posted by: Kevin at Nov 20, 2008 4:20:55 PM

Post a comment