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The Lighthouse Keeper

My ear, a shell on the pillow;

        the down, the sea from which his mouth arrived

Strange to live in a wet world, then wake in the desert.

        The cactus on whom milky needles grow.

Let me live offshore, where the water is low.

        Strange, and then so much less so.

I was seventeen.  Do you want

        to know what I didn't know?

I do.

That is from the new book of poetry by Meghan O'Rourke, columnist and culture editor at Slate.com.  Here are five more poems from the book.  Here is a page on the book.  Here is an interview.  Here is a rave New York Times review.

Posted by Tyler Cowen on May 1, 2007 at 05:56 PM in Books | Permalink

Comments

What is the poem about?
Not being snotty. I've always wanted to "get" poetry, but never have.
If someone can tell me what I'm looking at here, it would be most helpful!

Posted by: Student at May 1, 2007 6:04:37 PM

Sex.

Posted by: Teacher at May 1, 2007 8:00:20 PM

More seriously, I find this somewhat interesting, but not really enough so. The use of rhyme is arbitrary and clunky (I confess on rereading it I'm tempted to read the last line "I dough"). And does the metaphor in the second line really work out? (For example, did she actually see or feel the down? What happened, they tore up the pillow?)

Posted by: Vance Maverick at May 1, 2007 8:11:36 PM

Oy. When the payoff's not worth the effort to unravel the thing leave it in the drawer.

Posted by: ricpic at May 1, 2007 9:17:06 PM

Metal sandwich
frozen by long ostriches
repentant, only on Thursdays
a long fog of twilight.

You used to say
there were other reasons why
the jeopardized tiger would growl
on the beach, idly.

Now I know
fortunately with the waves
how much more prescient we could be
with our socks on.


Thanks very much, that'll be one hundred dollars.

Posted by: mk at May 1, 2007 10:07:33 PM

Here's what I'm getting...

The girl was dreaming about her first love
(ear to the pillow implies sleep. ear like shell, hearing echos of abscent seas).
She wakes up to find her self alone
(his love was like water, its absent is like the desert).
Then she wonders why?

Is that right? Because, if so, that seems very Freshman lit.
I hope I'm missing something.

Posted by: Student at May 1, 2007 10:30:36 PM

Yeah, I guess she dreamed about love, then experienced it, and it left her cold, then she avoided it for a while and grew thorny. Now she kinda wishes she had experienced more. She also thinks other people wish the same thing. Ah, lost youth. The lost youth of cactuses. Cacti?

Posted by: mk at May 1, 2007 11:33:56 PM

The poem is about: a bunch of images. That's what all poems are about. That's really about as hard as you need to read poetry. If you read it much harder, you don't feel that little twinge when you read those last three lines.

It works, and it makes me a little sad. A poem isn't some sort of game you have to figure out. It's just a thing. That thing either makes you happy or it doesn't. If it doesn't, that's cool. Move on, and find something else that does. Or, if it interests you, maybe try a little harder. But it's up to you.

Tyler seems to have impeccable taste in most things art, even if I typically only comment to whine when he takes gratuitous potshots at physicians.

Posted by: Garrett at May 2, 2007 1:21:55 AM

Eh. Most modern poetry sucks. The entire apparatus for critically judging it has collapsed. This is better than a college lit mag, which is all one can expect any more.

Posted by: mq at May 2, 2007 2:27:41 AM

I actually really like mark strand

Posted by: mk at May 2, 2007 9:36:52 AM

Garrett, your standards are disturbingly low. If you really mean this:

If you read it much harder, you don't feel that little twinge when you read those last three lines.

you should consider the possibility that that little twinge is an entirely meretricious effect.

Posted by: Vance Maverick at May 2, 2007 12:20:30 PM

VM-
I'd say we'd have to have at least a few cups of coffee to discuss what I really mean when I make the above statement, although be assured that I don't mean that one should read poetry flippantly, or that a lot of poetry isn't terrible, or that I have standards that even resemble low ones. You could disagree with the quality of my taste, but you'd be hard pressed to say that I wasn't pretty scathing about most things I read (assuming you knew me, of course).

The way most people are "taught" to read poetry, stemming mostly from high school English teachers who themselves hate poetry, is a "hard" reading, i.e. go through every line, try to pull out the literal meaning, try to justify mechanics before you even know whether you could even like the silly thing or not. Poetry students learn to be frustrated by poems long before they learn to enjoy reading them, and that's unfortunate, because most people never learn to enjoy poetry (not to say that everyone should, but certainly there are more people out there who would enjoy reading poetry if they didn't have Robert Frost enemas delivered to them in their 11th grade English class).

I probably read the thing 20 times before I could even come up with an opinion either way. This isn't a great poem, and it's not a complicated one. But it's not a bad one either. It could have been easily, and many poems go for a sort of cheap sentimentalism, and the first few times I read the thing, I didn't really know what to do with those last few lines (i.e., are they pop-song lame, or are they actually poignant?). In the end, I favored the latter, for reasons that I might be able to bumble through inarticulately over several cups of coffee.

Don't mistake me for an apologist for bad poetry, or for someone who doesn't take poetry seriously. My above words were mostly in response to the commenter who wanted to know what the poem is "about." That's a question that often isn't very helpful in understanding a poem.

Posted by: Garrett at May 2, 2007 1:07:32 PM

OK, thanks. I read "The poem is about: a bunch of images. That's what all poems are about." and leaped to conclusions.

Online, we have to try to get our meaning across without the aid of coffee -- and as readers, we sometimes have to remember to read as if coffee were provided.

Posted by: Vance Maverick at May 2, 2007 3:17:55 PM

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